It was the year 3057 where humans had a better technology. They had flying cars and they had teleporters. And the best thing was that, there was warp. Because of warp, humans were able to travel to Jupiter and they were able to travel out of the solar system. However, planet Earth started getting weaker and weaker. The gravity of Earth became like the moon and the Sun had lessen its temperature by 1000. Human civilization had to find a new planet in order to survive.
There was this man called Brian that loved to travel and he wanted to travel to a new planet where the people were able to live. Brian was a brilliant astronaut and a scientist and he was the one that made warp. While hi decided to find a new planet, there were also three other astronauts that were experts too. Their names were Lee, Leo and Jason. Those were also brilliant astronauts that helped Brian to make the spaceship. Together, they decided to travel to a new planet.
After 5 years of hard training, they were ready. They also made this spaceship called the Ferrari Flight. It had a speed of 197600 km per hour and the warp was a speed of then billion miles per hour. It was big as the stature of Liberty and they set off. In five seconds of war, they were out of the solar system and they started navigating to each planet if they had oxygen for humans to live. While they were searching for a planet, they felt like something was sucking them up. When Brian had a look at the window, they saw a gigantic hole that looked bigger than the solar system. . They knew it, it was the black hole. Their spaceship started running out of control and they ended up fainting in the spaceship.When they woke up in this mysterious land. They saw incredible things when they woke up. There was oxygen that they were breathing and they saw living organisms. They also saw these strange people that had flying shoes; they also had a car that was able to transform into a plane. They also touched a laptop that was light as a piece of bread that was able to lad in 0.1 seconds. Brian asked where they were at and the people spoke these strange languages and said this really strange name, "Dearth". They noticed that it rhymed with Earth and this planet even had a more advanced technology then in Earth. Brian was just so happy to find a planet like this and he was investigating all sorts of things. While Brian was investigating, Jason looked at the Space time watcher. It said the year was 10062. But they knew that they traveled at 3062. Jason ran over to Brian told him that they were in the future. While talking, something bad happened. A gigantic meteorite bigger than Dearth was approaching to Dearth.
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All I want to say after reading your story is .. Wow! It was a brilliant Sci-fi story. You elaborated the settings, conflicts, and resolutions so well that I delved into your story, which I rarely do. One thing you can improve is to use dialogues and elaborate more on the thoughts and emotions of each characters. Good job :)
ReplyDeleteInteresting story!
ReplyDeletehello, haaha, I'm reading this at 2016, and it's still me, soojong. Can't believe how of an inexperienced writer I was.
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