My Diamante Poems: By Soojong
Antonym Diamante
Summer
Scorching, Sweaty
Fishing, Camping, swimming
Camp fires, Beach balls, Watermelons, Tents
Skiing, Ice Skating, Snow fighting
Cold, Breezy
Winter
Synonym Diamante
Vegetables
Healthy, nutritious
Frying, cooking, boiling
Carrots, tomatoes, cucumbers, salad
Cutting, Chopping, Splitting
Delicious, natrually sweet
Fruits
Nice poem!!
ReplyDeleteIt is very good, but the line doesn't make sense because we do not eat watermelon in winter.
ReplyDeleteYour Diamante Poems are brilliant :) I liked your synonym poem, which adequately catches the characteristics of fruits and vegetables :) In case of your antonym poem, I would like to recommend you to work on with the 4th line. The poem would have been better if you had chosen 4 nouns in which summer and winter have in common. So, you can use other words than beach balls and watermelons. You can use Vacation, Holidays, Trip, or other things. :) Also, be careful with spelling mistakes.
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