Hi my name is Soojong and I'm 13 year old. I've been living at Singapore for most of my life and now I'm living at Hong Kong because of my dad's work. I'm now in grade 6 and I am going to an international school at Hong Kong. I grew up in Singapore for eleven years, so I'm really good at English and I had many experiences than the others didn't did. There is also a sea lion statue that spreads water out of its mouth which is really beautiful. I can speak three languages which is English, Chinese and Korean. I'm not a fluent Chinese speaker, but I'm still learning to know how to talk fluently and write properly. The best language I can speak is English, because I spoke this language for nearly most of my life. I can speak Korean but I still have to learn because I'll start forgetting it. One of my favorite hobbies are solving complicating mazes or games that you use your head a lot. My favorite maze game is the "Hardest game". It is an obstacle game where you have use your had to think and avoid obstacles in the game. I also like solving crossword puzzles which is fun and gives me entertainment. I also did this maze called the "scary maze". It's a game where you have to move a ball without touching sides in the maze. Once you reach to the end, a scary face will come out and freak you out. It was very fun and scary.That was about my introduction and I hope you enjoyed it

Your introduction starts off well and is detailed and interesting, but it ends too abruptly. The end of your introduction looks like you are introducing a game instead.
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